
Six Sentence Sunday was a blast last week. Thanks to all who checked out my entry.
Here's a little more from my fun contemporary fantasy, Surfacing:He owed her everything. “Thanks for saving me today.”
She tilted her head, as if awaiting his kiss. “I couldn’t let an alligator devour such a talented singer.”
It took all he had not to cup her face in his hands, press his mouth against hers. He began to speak, to call her name, then realized he didn’t know it.
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22 comments:
Ahh, AJ is such a cutie and yep, he's fallen hard. Great snippet, tight dialogue, lovely show of how smitten he is.
Kiss her! :)
Great snippet, Cate!
I can't wait to read this. Thanks for introducing me to Six Sentence Sunday!
Kiki
What a charming guy. so loveable. Greeat six.
aww, he should have kissed her after the whole gator thing lol
Great snippet. Looking forward to more.
But...will he ever find out her name? Love it
Very intriguing ... keep it coming :-)
I love the hook at the end!
He can find out her name later. Kiss her!
Very nice!
Oops. Problem. LOL
She certainly deserves a kiss for saving him from the alligator. Nice snippet!
Kiss first, talk later?
What a cute exchange, sounds like a great story. Thanks!
I think the consensus is everyone wants a kiss! LOL
Great lines, they stirred up quite the demands!
Great six! Looking forward to more next week!
ooh! this was romantic and sweet :)
So um...alligator?! Must read more...over to the excerpt...
I agree with Sara G... Kiss her! He ought to be able to reward his savior some how...LOL Love it!
aww so sweet and romantic. Lovely! And yikes, she saves him from an alligator!
I love the characters in this story. AJ is fabulous.
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