Saturday, March 12, 2011

Going into the wilderness for Six Sentence Sunday


Thanks to everyone who visited last week. Your comments mean so much to me! Thank you.


This week, I'm taking you into the wild with my 2011 EPIC finalist, Wilderness Girl. I'm sad none received an award, but still proud they finaled.

This is the very beginning of the story, when Dana goes to Wilderness Outfitters with her boyfriend Sean. Their relationship's been rocky, and she hopes giving in to a camping trip will heat it back up. She thinks he's snuck up behind her in the store, and decides to get a little playful, and is unzipping him when she catches sight of Sean crossing through the main aisle.



“Oh my God.” Her breath strangled in her throat and she whirled around.
Six feet of tanned muscle, wrapped in a faded black T-shirt and jean shorts loose on his hips. Eyes like wildfire burning in a sun-kissed face. Grinning like a fox.
“Well, don’t stop there. You have my full attention.”



You can view the trailer, read reviews, the blurb and excerpt for Wilderness Girl here.


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19 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

Oops! I wonder what Sean will think. Well, if their relationship is not to good, maybe this new guy is available. Sounds like a fun scene.

Arlene said...

I love it. What a great set up for trouble and with so many directions you could go, I want to read more!!

Chrystalla Thoma said...

lol! Fantastic six! I'd love to read more.

Sandra Sookoo said...

Loved it and can't wait to read more!

Patricia Preston said...

I loved it. Great descriptions.

Linda Morris, Romance writer said...

Ha ha! What a surprise. . .

graylinfox said...

Love it! Sounds like she found someone willing to play!

D L Jackson said...

Ha, ha. Ha, ha, ha.
Awesome. Love this.
Now I have to go buy it.

Sarah Grimm said...

I just bet she does! LOL I love this!

Lucy Felthouse said...

Oooh, sexy! :)

kayspringsteen said...

And this excerpt now has MY full attention. WOW!

diannehartsock said...

Ooops! What a tantalizing mistake. Where will it lead? ;)

Laurie A. Green said...

Now there's a hook! Definitely want to read more.

Liz said...

I LOVE THIS - WHOO_HOO

Lisa Fox said...

That sounds like an all right mistake.

Lindsay said...

Beautiful visualation. Sounds like lust at first look

Christine London said...

Six feet of tanned muscle. Yum.
Thanks for sharing this guy ;)
Christine London
www.christinelondon.com

Jayel Kaye said...

somethings bewing

Pippa Jay said...

ROFL! That'll teach her not to handle the good sight unseen in future! :-P