Sunday, August 21, 2011

Different take on the situation for SSS

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Here's another quick six from my dark paranormal, Dead to Rights. Our heroine nearly is shot by camp guards for walking in the woods at night. Michael comes to her rescue:



Cold crawled across my skin. “So we’re prisoners.”


This seemed to cheer him. “Only technically.”


A laugh burst out. “Oh, I love your positive spin on the situation.”





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27 comments:

Alexandra O'Hurley said...

First person....you are a brave one! Good six.

Graylin Fox said...

I hope they get out of there.. :)

Taryn Kincaid said...

Me, too. Love his positive spin. "Only technically." Great!

Liz said...

And I love this six!

Carrie Ann Ryan said...

Oh - great six. Now what will happen?

Kiki Howell - Author said...

Always love your sixes!

Sam Crescent said...

Great Six

Vivien Dean said...

Gotta love those optimists! Great six!

Sherry Gloag said...

Another great six :-)

Cheryl M. said...

Love the upbeat attitude about a seemingly dire situation. Love the first person as well!

Lindsay said...

Guess someone has to has the positive outlook. Love it

Zee Monodee said...

Lol - love that 'technicality' too! :)

Paula Martin said...

Love his optimistic outlook - 'only technically'. Great six!

Kerrianne Coombes said...

Always gotta love positive attitudes! LOL

Jessica K said...

You're such a versatile writer. Another great snippet.

Pippa Jay said...

Insanely positive attitude!

Gem Sivad said...

The dialog sets up the relationship, the characters, and the action. Great six!

diannehartsock said...

I'm really enjoying this story! Thanks for sharing it with us. You show so much with such few lines.

J.A. Beard said...

'only technically'

Haha. Perfect.

Bree said...

Ah...an optimist!! lol!!

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

Love that first line; wonderfully descriptive and unique.

Kathleen Grieve said...

Great dialogue in an intense situation! :)

Chrystalla Thoma said...

Love your dialogue! Great six. :)

1000th.monkey said...

I loved the, 'That seemed to cheer him' line. So funny!

Joanne Stewart said...

LOVE his spin on it! Great six!

Angela Brown said...

Awesome six. Definitely got me intrigued.

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Always look on the bright side of life...da da da -- I can almost hear him humming this hehe Fab snippet xx