Sunday, August 7, 2011

Who's watching you?

Thanks to everyone who stops by each week! And especially thanks for your comments.

Here's another six from my dark paranormal, Dead to Rights.
Riding on the bus taking her to the New Day Order camp, our heroine gets a fright when she realizes someone’s watching her:

He stared openly, a strange glow in the whites of his eyes.
My heart pounded. Grateful for Ellen’s insistence that we sit together, I feigned settling in to rest. Impossible with him still watching intently. And he was. I didn’t know how I knew, but I’d swear it.