Another Six Sentence Sunday! Yay! Thanks to everyone who visits, and especially for your comments.
Here's another peek at Death Is A Bitch, now making the submission rounds. According to The Dictionary of Angels, Azrael is the patron angel associated with the process of death and dying. Affairs in the workplace can be complicated, but Death can't resist Azrael:
Their intense feelings caused the universe to react by churning up its own excitement.
Azrael held her closer, his hands exploring everywhere, and clouds rushed together to roil in a heated embrace. She wrapped herself around him, opened herself to him and the winds swept hot air crashing into cold. Desire sizzled through her, and lightning crackled through the charged atmosphere. They moved with the rhythm of his wings, beating faster and faster as they streaked as one through the black night. Glimmering stars swirled past, and the planets hummed in delight.Be sure to check out all the fantastic offerings by participating SSS authors! Have a great week!

33 comments:
I love this six, it flows so well, perfect!
A vivid and sexual storm. Great six!
OMG, girl - this is good! Love the first line especially. Great job!
What a haunting, lyrical piece. I love your voice!
Ohhh very sexy storm... LOVE IT! And good luck with the subs xxx hopefully, you'll have fab news to share with us all very soon!
I'm glad my bedroom activity doesn't dictate the weather. People would know how boring I am. Great six, Cate!
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Definately a charged, intense six. :)
Oh, intense scene. Love it.
Fantastic imagery. Azrael is one of my favorite angels, though I can't say Ive ever quite thought of him this way. Whew! hot stuff. Great six.
Wow. Such wonderfully vivid description.
Oooh angels! Love them. Great six! And so beautifully described. :)
There is just something really hot about a guy with wings.
I want a storm like that in my bedroom--just once! Great imagery! Can't wait to read more.
Wow! Lots of atmosphere!! Love it!
beautifully descriptive! Great 6!
Liz
Love this six and the great description you give
What a fantastic image.
Beautifully written! I could see and feel the storm building arouond them. Wow.
Love the fantasy here. The description was so vivid! Great six!
Amy Durham
Wow, exciting, love the storm sequence.
A storm outside and in! Teriffic.
I'm blown away by the sheer magnetism and opower in your writing. Awesome visuals, doesn't begin to cover how I feel about your snippet this week.
I'm absolutely in love with this!
Very good. I could feel the damp winds and heated passion rolling together for a magnificent storm. Blew me away. Since my own WIP features some angelic beings I was very interested. Thanks for a great six!
Oh, I love this - the last line especially. So beautiful!
Powerful, crackling, just like the lightening image. Great 6!
I am in LOVE with this six. Beautiful detail and description, excellent voice... and your writing style is very lyrical.
This just crackles. Love it!
Wonderful! Loved the sexual tension, heat, and sensuality in this!
I love the idea that their passion sparks off a thunderstorm. :)
Wonderful description ;) ...and just under the line of being *too naughty* that I would have skipped over this SSS submission ;)
Your pic totally suits this snippet! Very vivid!
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