Sunday, September 25, 2011

Death's paramour - the angel Azrael

Another Six Sentence Sunday! Yay! Thanks to everyone who visits, and especially for your comments. 

Here's another peek at Death Is A Bitch, now making the submission rounds. According to The Dictionary of Angels, Azrael is the patron angel associated with the process of death and dying. Affairs in the workplace can be complicated, but Death can't resist Azrael:


Their intense feelings caused the universe to react by churning up its own excitement.

Azrael held her closer, his hands exploring everywhere, and clouds rushed together to roil in a heated embrace. She wrapped herself around him, opened herself to him and the winds swept hot air crashing into cold.  Desire sizzled through her, and lightning crackled through the charged atmosphere. They moved with the rhythm of his wings, beating faster and faster as they streaked as one through the black night. Glimmering stars swirled past, and the planets hummed in delight.

33 comments:

gemma parkes said...

I love this six, it flows so well, perfect!

Gem Sivad said...

A vivid and sexual storm. Great six!

Zee Monodee said...

OMG, girl - this is good! Love the first line especially. Great job!

Angela Guillaume said...

What a haunting, lyrical piece. I love your voice!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Ohhh very sexy storm... LOVE IT! And good luck with the subs xxx hopefully, you'll have fab news to share with us all very soon!

Ginger Simpson said...

I'm glad my bedroom activity doesn't dictate the weather. People would know how boring I am. Great six, Cate!

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Ranae Rose said...

Definately a charged, intense six. :)

Marie Dees said...

Oh, intense scene. Love it.

Joanne Stewart said...

Fantastic imagery. Azrael is one of my favorite angels, though I can't say Ive ever quite thought of him this way. Whew! hot stuff. Great six.

Eleri Stone said...

Wow. Such wonderfully vivid description.

Jay Di Meo said...

Oooh angels! Love them. Great six! And so beautifully described. :)

Lex Valentine said...

There is just something really hot about a guy with wings.

Jenna said...

I want a storm like that in my bedroom--just once! Great imagery! Can't wait to read more.

Bree said...

Wow! Lots of atmosphere!! Love it!

Liz said...

beautifully descriptive! Great 6!
Liz

Lindsay said...

Love this six and the great description you give

Cara Bristol said...

What a fantastic image.

diannehartsock said...

Beautifully written! I could see and feel the storm building arouond them. Wow.

Amy said...

Love the fantasy here. The description was so vivid! Great six!

Amy Durham

Paula Martin said...

Wow, exciting, love the storm sequence.

Elaine Cantrell said...

A storm outside and in! Teriffic.

Sherry Gloag said...

I'm blown away by the sheer magnetism and opower in your writing. Awesome visuals, doesn't begin to cover how I feel about your snippet this week.

Liz said...

I'm absolutely in love with this!

Jp Archer said...

Very good. I could feel the damp winds and heated passion rolling together for a magnificent storm. Blew me away. Since my own WIP features some angelic beings I was very interested. Thanks for a great six!

melissamackinnon said...

Oh, I love this - the last line especially. So beautiful!

Jennifer Wilck said...

Powerful, crackling, just like the lightening image. Great 6!

Ana Hart said...

I am in LOVE with this six. Beautiful detail and description, excellent voice... and your writing style is very lyrical.

Vivien Dean said...

This just crackles. Love it!

Kathleen Grieve said...

Wonderful! Loved the sexual tension, heat, and sensuality in this!

Pippa Jay said...

I love the idea that their passion sparks off a thunderstorm. :)

1000th.monkey said...

Wonderful description ;) ...and just under the line of being *too naughty* that I would have skipped over this SSS submission ;)

Jennifer Lowery (Kamptner) said...

Your pic totally suits this snippet! Very vivid!