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To set up the scene, veterinarian Eric Hendricks has fallen for his new neighbor, Joss Gibson. He doesn't realize this makes him a target of the Lord of the Underworld and his minions, who want to control the energy in the ley lines beneath the inn Joss bought.
Eric's in the shower, and he's not alone... mwahaha!
Water ran in rivulets down the opaque glass shower door. He tensed at seeing the outline of a small hand, smaller than a child’s.
Like images on photographic paper, small hands appeared randomly, one by one, disappearing as quickly as they came.
“Who’s there?”
A hollow whisper echoed, but he couldn’t make out the words.
The glass cleared, and a hiss sounded through the steam.
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24 comments:
Very suspenseful! I want the rest of the scene!
You've created great atmosphere!
What a blog title! Great six sentences!
Very spooky. Great scene.
Going by your 'mwhahaha' line, I thought there was going to be a bit of naughty-naughty in the shower but methinks whoever it was, wasn't exactly human! Intriguing snippet!
Wow!! I don't know whether to be intrigued or scared!!
Terrific. Great imagery.
You make me want to double-check my shower stall! Great mood and ominous suspense. :)
Now that was unexpected and a bit creepy. Nice job!
Not quite the Psycho shower scene, but I'm checking the stall before getting in. Maybe Eric should have too! Good and creepy six.
Wow, that is one creepy, imaginative scene!
Now that's creepy! Very well executed.
Okay, that was very creepy. The shower is just such a vulnerable place, too.
fantastic six, Cate! I want to read more.
Spooky and suspenseful.Great combination!
Spooky. The little hands thing is really creepy plus being in the shower naked and vulnerable.
Spooky and suspenseful. Great combination.
YIkes! Totally creepy. Reminds me of the shower scene in "Psycho" -- something I've just barely recovered from seeing. Now I'm gonna be washing my hair with my eyes open.
nice picture, but very creepy and suspenseful snippet! great six!
This is an awesome snippet, totally creepy! Loved it!
Okay, now that you've got my attention are we going to find out who's outside the door
Great shower scene! I was on the edge of my seat!
Oooo, that is just creepy! Are they some kind of water elemental?
wow, love the imagery here...and the tension! Fantastic stuff xx
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