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Here's another peek at Death Is A Bitch. Death can't get enough of Azrael:
Standing at his full height, Azrael’s wings unfolded with a glorious whoosh. His feathers glimmered white as newfallen snow in the moonlight.
Magnificent. Death found herself breathless with admiration, and wishing those wings would wrap around her. Last time, she’d found feathers for eons afterward, stuck in her gown, in her hair. She hadn’t minded one bit.
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36 comments:
I'm not sure I'd mind dealing with all the feathers, either! Well done!
This must be one of my favorites! Death dealing with feathers on her gown and in her hear... unique! Loved it.
So visual, Cate, I'm almost sneezing from those feathers, but witha guy like that who cares? :-)
Wow! So visual and emotional. Especially love how she wanted the wings wrapped around her.
I don't think I would mind the feather either!
Oh, beautiful, I love the imagery of the feathers unfurling. Nope, I wouldn't mind either! Sensational six!
Ooh sounds yummy!
Azrael sounds like my kind of angel! :) And how refreshing that Death is a girl -- great six!
J.C.
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I don't think any woman in their right mind would mind! Death has a crush! Love it. :)
Great imagery and insight! A fabulous six!
An excellent six.
Oh, I love feathers LOL. Great visuals!
I loved the part about finding the feathers! I don't think I'd mind either!
What works here is the touch of humor: the contrast of the transcendent, the sexy, and the down-to-earth practical (feathers stuck on one's clothes). It makes it more real.
I don't know why but I find this so touching - she loving Azrael... Great story. :)
Lol, I bet she didn't mind, since I'm pretty sure Azrael is, uhm, quite something, right? *wink*
Ohhh, lovely description. I wouldn't mind those feathers one bit, either.
Love it. Death and the angel in an unholy tryst. Awesome!
Love the picture you created here with the white feathers and death and her wanting to feel the feathers again
Heck, move aside Death. Azreal sounds intoxicating.
Wow!
Great excerpt, Cate -really evocative
I probably wouldn't mind either...
Barb
Wonderful description!
Your imagery is so powerful and amazing. I can feel her breathlessness as his wings unfold. Beautiful.
Really really like Death. Such a strong interesting voice.
Azrael sounds wickedly hot! Fantastic snippet. :)
Love this, love everything about this! Feathers stuck in her hair...great touch!
I love the imagery, so vivid and almost poignant as Death looks at him.
Love this one! The feathers in her hair is excellent!
A few feathers for a great night...sounds like a good trade! ;-)
Vivid Six...definitely want to read more.
That's beautiful! I love the idea of her finding feathers for all that time afterward.
Urgh... snow isn't white under the moonlight, it's blue!
...but blue feathers would be awesome ;)
this is such a fun story :)
I am really liking this interpretation of death.
This story is so fun! I loved the description of where she found the feathers! Great six.
Awesome snippet!
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