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Here's another six from Orion Rising, my literary family saga - today's the last day to snag your free copy from Amazon, so go get yours now! :) The father in this story was a bit of a dreamer, with his head in the stars.
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Here's another six from Orion Rising, my literary family saga - today's the last day to snag your free copy from Amazon, so go get yours now! :) The father in this story was a bit of a dreamer, with his head in the stars.
The footfalls of Persephone, our
father had always called it: the slow, steady patter of rain across the roof;
the spring rains that, like Persephone, awoke the sleeping bulbs in the earth,
the buds on the trees, unfurling, petal by petal, a world of color and life. Persephone’s glad return to Earth from the
dark depths of the shadowy, lifeless underworld of Hades signaled the beginning
of a season of rebirth. I listened to the soft footfalls across the roof,
wide-eyed, hoping to catch a glimpse of the fair maiden. She was more real to
me than Santa Claus, whose gifts were only for one night; Persephone’s gifts
changed the dreary winter world to spring.
But this spring was different. After
a particularly long winter, a foot of snow remained on the ground for what seemed
forever.

14 comments:
Good visionary. Hmm why is there still a foot of snow on the ground? Great six!
You are so good at description. Beautiful, vivid imagery in this.
Beautiful piece of prose here
This is a lovely description. Most enjoyable.
This is so lovely, Cate. A dreamy homage to her father. Perfect for today.
Beautiful description. BTW, I downloaded it and have read some.
Lovely description of rain.
I really liked the description and the narrator's desire to see the "maiden" causing spring. Very cool six, Cate. :)
An absolutely beautiful expert. You drew me right in - just stunning.
What an evocative bit of prose! I loved it!
I love the way you handled this description. Great flow without sounding overwritten.
It's the most beautiful, description place I've read about in a long time. Exquisite and breathtaking.
I can picture this scene so well. I love the description.
I just went and snagged your book! Thanks! Looking forward to reading it. :)
Beautifully written scene! This book sounds so lovely.
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